blog 14 what I need to improve on

what i need to work on using more symbols that I can intertwine into symbolic actions from the story. I also need to expand on certain parts of the story that I have mentioned about the story in order to get to the next level. I should make sure that I don't mixed symbolism with interpretation at the need of my story. one last things, I think that going to help my story improve is that I should categorizes the symbols so that it can flow smoothly with the symbolic actions.